Feb
05
2012
Tanjung Rhu Resort
Can someone help me structure this sentence?
This sentence is supposed to be the title of my term paper but I just can’t seem to phrase it well. The sentence is “Tanjung Rhu Resort is one of the few Resorts in langkawi to be concerned with the environment”. I came up with:
“Tanjung Rhu Resort: Langkawi’s attempt at being environment friendly” but don’t think thats good enough. Help??? 
Tamjung Rhu: Langkawi’s environmentally friendly resort.
this makes a good title, but not a good first sentence.
When white sand beaches are the norm, and dense forrests studded with tropical flowers surround travellers, few travellers realize the resort maintains beauty while practicing environmentally sound practices.
Lankawi Tanjung Rhu Resort
